Thursday, January 29, 2009

Excerpt Reaction

Toni Morrison: Beloved 1987

What Morrison spoke about in this excerpt was the unfair treatment of people based on the color of their skin and how these people should not be ashamed of their race. He used very illustrative language to paint a visual of the maltreatment of these people such as, "They don't love your eyes; they'd just as soon pick em out. No more do they love the skin on your back." With racism being a problem in his time, extreme emotion is needed to elicit pride in your race no matter what anyone says or does. Morrison chose the word "flesh" to refer to people. Flesh brings about a more radical reaction and a more graphic picture. Morrison convinced me that loving your flesh needs to be done.


Racism has decreased in recent decades. With the election of an African American president, change has been brought to America. This excerpt would reach out to a lot of Americans. Although the severity of its meaning has been taken differently in the past. The importance of this message is still the same. In my hometown of Hanover, if this excerpt were to be published, I think the message would fall on deaf ears and the theme misinterpreted. Most of Hanover is populated with old white Republicans which probably voted for John McCain. However, the youth is more open now to diversity and prosperity of the races. Overall, this message is a good one no matter what your race is. Everyone needs to be proud of who they are

Wednesday, January 28, 2009

Thursday, 1/29 In Class

Please answer the following questions by clicking on the heading to this post. Use sentences, paragraphs, and appropriate grammar, and don't forget to answer "why."

1. After reading the four excerpts below, identify two examples of pathos. Discuss the argument the writer is trying to make, why he or she chose to use this particular rhetorical strategy, and whether or not it is working. Does the writer convince you that his or her argument is valid? Why or why not? How do the writers differ in their strategies for making a point about the treatment of African Americans? How do voice, tone, diction, organization, metaphor, etc. affect the writer's argument?

2. Next, place these arguments in context. After you think of the writer's argument "locally," describe what "global" factors may influence your reading. For instance, what does it mean for the excerpt to appear in the particular book it does? How does the current political climate affect your reading? Have you had personal experiences that affect your reading? What is the state of current American race relations?

3. After you've posted your answers to questions 1 and 2, respond to your classmates' responses until the end of class. Keep in mind that this is meant to be a class discussion via the blog. Challenge one another; agree; disagree; ask questions; etc. The work you put into this assignment will be reflected in your participation grade today. 

 
The following excerpts are quotations from Race Matters by Cornel West, published by Vintage in 1994:

" ' Here,' she said, 'in this here place, we flesh; flesh that weeps, laughs; flesh that dances on bare feet in grass. Love it. Love it hard. Yonder they do not love your flesh. They despise it. They don't love your eyes; they'd just as soon pick em out. No more do they love the skin on your back. Yonder they flay it. And O my people they do not love your hands. Those they only use, tie, bind, chop off and leave empty. Love your hands! Love them. Raise them up and kiss them. Touch others with them, pat them together, stroke them on your face 'cause they don't love that either. You got to love it, You! . . . This is flesh I'm talking about here. Flesh that needs to be loved.' "

~Toni Morrison: Beloved 1987



"Institutionalized rejection of difference is an absolute necessity in a profit economy which needs outsiders as surplus people. As members of such an economy, we have all been programmed to respond to the human differences between us with fear and loathing and to handle that difference in one of three ways: ignore it, and if that is not possible, copy it if we think it is dominant, or destroy it if we think it is subordinate. But we have no patterns for relating across our human differences as equals. As a result, those differences have been misnamed and misused in the service of separation and confusion."

~Audre Lorde: Sister Outsider 1984



"You don't stick a knife in a man's back nine inches and then pull it out six inches and say you're making progress.

No matter how much respect, no matter how much recognition, whites show towards me, as far as I'm concerned, as long as it is not shown to every one of our people in this country, it doesn't exist for me."

~Malcolm X 1964



"Insistence on patriarchal values, on equating black liberation with black men gaining access to male privilege that would enable them to assert power over black women, was one of the most significant forces undermining radical struggle. Thorough critiques of gender would have compelled leaders of black liberation struggles to envision new strategies and to talk about black subjectivity in a visionary manner."

~Bell Hooks: Yearning: Race, Gender, and Cultural Politics 1990


Link to more information on pathos, ethos, and logos

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I've compiled lists of the classes' most popular interests and most common writing issues, based on your writing samples:

Interests: Writing Issues:

News/Current Events Planning/Beginning
Health/Exercise Writer's Block
Nature/Outside Focus/Concision
Novels Grammar
Music Time Constraints
Creative Writing Comprehension
Religion Vocabulary
Children Pressure
Family
Traveling
Films
Shopping
Health Care

Welcome

English 102 Classes,

Welcome to our new blog! We will use this site to write, read, ask questions, read prompts, discuss events, post pictures, etc., any way we can that pertains to this class. I've combined both of my 102 classes. You're both doing the same work this semester and will hopefully benefit from this collaboration.

Best,
Kate Brady