I did provide evidence of analysis of my examples. Once example of this is “Broken bottles at the children’s feet…”. This example proves the thesis when describing a war torn area. I will also need to provide the figurative language for each example.
Examples on which I should elaborate:
· The trench is dug within our hearts
· And mothers, children, brothers, sisters torn apart
· The religious mention of Jesus in the last verse.
The most outstanding aspect of my draft is about the music video. After watching the video, it proves how real it is. The realness of the video helps to prove the realness of the argument that the song is about.
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